This is an evocative poem. I get that the repeated "j" wasn't completely your choice, but it adds a lovely rhythm and punchiness that matches the jabbering and jeering nicely.
the place where people have lived,
where they dreamed, the great Split changed this now they're eternaly dying
both song of hearth and earth breaking
a few people around the forgotten fire
did they fall for Dad
did they dive into Fate
following the seeds, they feed it
what a strange kitty, quiet and quick
hidden in tea store, stays wild and tensile
dear Steven, my deadly one, surely spectrum now
do you stay, do somewhat someone survive
surprise me, i said
survive, you said.
so i'm standing in the middle of strangers.
dear you dying dove diving down and down.
I guess I didn't understand at first, then I tried to follow the rules!
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So if you played this game, I really want to see your corpse poem(s). You should write them here or on Twitter (@bigstuffedcat)
Jeer, jesters, jeer justly.
Janissaries, jaegers, jarls - judge.
Jackdaws jabber,
Jackals jaw,
Jesters… jest.
This is an evocative poem. I get that the repeated "j" wasn't completely your choice, but it adds a lovely rhythm and punchiness that matches the jabbering and jeering nicely.
I guess I didn't understand at first, then I tried to follow the rules!